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One of the photos I submitted for my basic photography course assignment :)

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I dont know what comments you were given at the course, however I feel that it is a bit confusing as you have 2 subjects in the rule of thirds position. Besides that the kennies should ideally be facing the other way.
(dont wish to be too harsh but this is what I feel)

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The things you mentioned passed through my head after I took the photo and I was not going to submit it. But it had something that I liked in it so I submitted it. I like the simplicity and the moment I paused although it does not follow every "rule". I know that not everyone will like it :) thanks for your comment and critique.

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You're welcome for the critique :)
I know what you mean, a photo might not follow rules but still look good

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tipiku malti :)

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Love this photo. To be honest, the blur isn't really needed in my opinion. :) In fact, I think it distracts some of the image's features.

Can I suggest you remove the blur... and make his broom coloured? :) Surely since his other items of profession are coloured, his broom should be too.

Also, lovely shot. :)
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thanks for your comments and suggestions :D

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Jul 10, 2009, 11:00:18 AM

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